at sunset in spring
he reclines at the window
watching the twilight
he reclines at the window
watching the twilight
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Re: cat haiku
Thu, April 3, 2008 - 8:18 AMmeow meow MEW
why don't you understand me?
i say give treats NOW
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Re: cat haiku
Fri, April 4, 2008 - 8:23 PMshe waits at the door
anxiously awaiting treats
that taste like salmon
Well that's the best I could do! And it took me about ten minutes to come up with it! -
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Re: cat haiku
Fri, April 4, 2008 - 8:48 PMToy with hapless prey
Make the kitchen rodent-free
Drop it on the bed
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 2:45 AMMy Bobby Blue-Eyes
Just got good news from the vet.
The lump is benign. -
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 9:09 AMAll this feline verse
Should be gathered in a book:
"Cat Lovers Haiku."
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 10:19 AMspring fever has sprung
smell of fresh grass, sun-warmed fur
but where's my food dish
spring has sprung at last
just as i spring upon my prey
patterns of life
(Sorry, I'm stuck in my spring fever theme. I'll try for something better once this passes :-)
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 10:59 AMI tap on the glass
Baby squirrels ignore me.
I watch them eat nuts.
My Tamurlain's haiku.
Alaric's haiku (which tied for first place on Catster) is
Tamurlain likes me.
Morgan will always hate me.
My bowl is half full. -
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 8:29 PMLick the fluffy fur.
That percussive sound we hear?
Hairball on the rug! -
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 5, 2008 - 9:01 PMhairball = catsplat
My mother came up with that years ago and it's just one of those phrases that fits so well. So descriptive. Alliteration. Perfect emotional resonance. All that good stuff.
Sorry, I don't want to distract anyone from your lovely haiku. Just had to share a fun word.
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Re: cat haiku
Sat, April 19, 2008 - 4:32 PMsleeping in sunshine
birds singing in warm spring air
my ears keep twitching
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